Treatment- Redone

Title 
Hit and Miss


Duration
Before editing our movie should be 6.30 minutes and after editing our target is to get our movie down to 5 minutes including the titles. 


Audience including distributor
I have found the audience are going to be mostly teenagers aged 15-25. However, we haven't restricted the audience age by not creating the movie with just teenagers in mind. We are going to use shop assistant who is around 30 to give audience around that age someone who is similar situation and age as them. The movie isn't restricted to male audience however the two main actors are male which might give male audience more interest than females. The audience are going to be mostly from yorkshire as it will be filmed in Barnsley and the actors are all from yorkshire. However, as there is no location based motto it shouldn't matter too much and all English speaking audience could watch it. The certificate we are going to use for this movie is 15 as it has a bit of violence but not enought to make it 18. It has some swearing in but its not ever flooded with it.
Summary

initially, the heist is proving to be a success, until the clumsy and unprofessional rookie shows the boss up. This theme continues into the escape sequence as the rookie mistakenly loses some of the money after he falls over.

The film then progresses to the aftermath of the heist at the thieves' safehouse. The boss is counting the money and to his dismay, he discovers that some of the money is missing. Fearing that his partner has ripped him off, the boss pulls a gun on the rookie after a heated argument. In return, the rookie pulls his gun on the boss. After a thrilling, tense standoff, the roles get reversed. The boss makes a rookie mistake, as he pulls the trigger to find that the gun isn't loaded. The camera then cuts to outside of the house with a gunshot going off from inside the house, leaving the audience guessing the outcome of the standoff, this is followed by the rookie fleeing the house. The camera then cuts inside, slowly revealing the corpse of the boss, along with the abandoned money.

The film then cuts to black, followed by the credits.

After this, there's a short clip of a stranger discovering the lost money.

This concludes a thrilling short film.

Suggested elements

Our movie has a distinct feature as the robbers are two different style of people. One is not experienced and the other one is the boss. Another good special element to our movie is that the movie ends in a funny way. Most of the thriller movies haven't had that element and our has a distinct element to them.